Does punctuation really matter?
The fuss generated by Lynne Truss’s book, “Eats Shoots & Leaves: the zero tolerance approach to punctuation,” really brought this topic into focus when it was first published. From the way everyone was talking when the book came out, you’d think punctuation was a whole new, previously unappreciated art form that could light up all our lives.
In the cold light of the business day, though, punctuation is not much more than a set of tools we use to fine tune our writing -– nothing more romantic than that.
You’ve probably noticed that it tends to split into two separate categories:
1. Punctuation that affects the meaning of what you write (so it’s worth getting right)
2. Punctuation that doesn’t really affect the meaning of what you write (but irritates some people if you get it wrong)
Beyond that, also there are variations in punctuation rules from one English language culture to the next. Most of those, I would say, fall into category #2.
So let’s take a look at the topic from the non-literary, business-only viewpoint. Please note these are my opinions only and I’m no English graduate – only a realist - so feel free to disagree!
Punctuation that affects the meaning of what you write (so it’s worth getting right)
Apostrophe
This is probably the most misunderstood punctuation element of them all. Time and time again I see examples of the apostrophe incorrectly used and I think, “well, if I can get them right on the strength of mere high school / secondary school English, why can’t they?” Apostrophes are easy. Here’s how:
The apostrophe is used in 3 main ways:
1. To make a noun possessive - Suze’s, the children’s, everyone’s – and if it has an “s” at the end of the original noun, then the apostrophe goes after that – cheeses’ – helpers’ – mothers’ – etc.
2. To show you’ve left something out and/or contracted two words - don’t, won’t, she’ll, he’d, etc.,
and most importantly, it’s as in the contraction of it is
3. To indicate plurals of some lowercase letters - but only a few, as in “mind your p’s and q’s.
The apostrophe is NOT used to accompany possessive pronouns or for noun plurals, including acronyms and well-known abbreviations.
So you DO NOT need an apostrophe in examples like his … yours … hers … its (aha, that’s why!) … etc.
Similarly you DO NOT need an apostrophe to make plurals out of things like … the 1970s … Ipods … PCs … etc.
Comma
Here’s another really useful punctuation mark. Commas split thought processes after introductory 1) words, 2) phrases or 3) clauses, particularly where there would be a pause in natural speech.
1) However, I’m delighted to say that…
2) From the employee’s perspective, I can see we need to…
3) Looking at it from the employee’s perspective, I can see we need to…
Semi colon
This creates a more dramatic pause, usually to link two clauses if you don’t want to use a verbal link like “and” or “but.”
With verbal link:I want to go to the wine bar, but I have work to do here
Without verbal link:I want to go to the wine bar; I have work to do here, however
You can also use semi colons to create a list – for example…
In writing fiction we need to consider a number of issues including establishing the background; defining the main characters; developing the plot; introducing sub-plots; and sketching the roles of supporting characters.
Bullet points
In modern business writing – especially for online purposes – it’s usually better to use bullet points to form a list, because they’re easier to follow both verbally and visually. Generally you should use them for lists of three or more points, and probably for no more than about ten without some sort of break.
Colon
This creates an even more definitive pause. It’s most frequently used after a complete (short) statement so you can introduce one or more directly related ideas. If they come in list form you may want to use semi colons to separate the list entries that follow.
For example …
The following people were instrumental in helping us achieve our goals: John Doe, senior chemist; Mary Jones, technical manager; Joe Bloggs, technical advisor; Jane Smith, liaison officer.
Don’t forget, too, that colons form an essential part of timings (e.g. 05:00 hours, 6:00 p.m.)
Period/full stop
Need I say more? Well, yes. Be sure you use this punctuation mark often enough. Long sentences in contemporary business communications tend to wander and obscure meaning. Shorter sentences are punchier, better understood, and far more powerful.
Parentheses/brackets
Parentheses section off extra thoughts that, although not critical, are still relevant to a sentence, e.g. … I wondered if the old homestead (which had been built in the 19th century) would withstand this modern onslaught of renovation.
Dash
To an extent dashes perform the same function as parentheses … e.g. I wondered if the old homestead -- which had been built in the 19th century -- would withstand this modern onslaught of renovation. They also can be used in the same way as a colon, e.g. I wondered if the old homestead would withstand this modern onslaught of renovation –- having been built in the 19th century, it might not have been strong enough.
Quotation marks/inverted commas
These marks show direct quotations. Whether other punctuation marks like commas, periods/full stops, colons and semi colons go inside or outside the quote marks depends on where you went to school!
Quote marks also indicate words you want to pull out to suggest irony or some other quirk.In an advertising or promotional context, some people feel that to put quote marks around a statement will make readers believe it has been said by some authoritative person and therefore deserves to be taken seriously.
Well, I know that can work when you’re advertising a fairly low-level product to a certain mass-market level. But believe me if you operate in the higher echelons of business-to-business communications, forget that one. If you want it to be believed, make sure you attribute it to its genuine originator.
Punctuation that doesn’t really affect the meaning of what you
write (but irritates some people if you get it wrong)
Hyphen
Hyphens are used to join two words into one compound word … e.g. well-known, eighty-three, semi-skilled. You also should hyphenate words with some prefixes and suffixes like ex-wife, mid-1970s, self-interested, chairman-elect.
Exclamation mark
People often tend to overuse the exclamation mark which weakens its impact. I’m guilty of this. Often I’ll compose an email to someone, then go back and edit out all but one or two of the “screamers.” Too many of these cheapen your writing, even if it is intended to be light-hearted.
Leader dots…
Another “guilty” from Suze … see? You can use these instead of parentheses or dashes, but they are frowned upon by some people. To be safe, it’s better to use them sparingly or not at all.
Underlining
Underlining is a common way to emphasize text, but be very careful about using it in text that is intended to be used online. Here, an underlined word or words in an email or web text can represent a link. It’s best to use the bold facility for emphasis.
Italics
Another means of emphasizing text. Online, try to avoid using it unless your font is large, because italics are not easy to read from a screen. Traditionally they’re used to show the title of something like a play or newspaper, and also some foreign words e.g. haute cuisine, schadenfreude.
Slash/oblique
This is often used to represent and, or, or and/or. Use it sparingly online as it can be visually confusing
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